Hi all,
another piece of writing prompt fiction for you. This one is slightly different. I took a random plot generated by https://www.plot-generator.org.uk/story-ideas/https://www.plot-generator.org.uk/story-ideas/ and gave myself 20 minutes to fill out a Save The Cat style beat sheet.
I think I got everything, let me know what you think.
You can find the original randomly generated plot prompt below the piece. But first, sit back and enjoy a story that probably won’t be coming to Disney Plus any time soon.
Reis is the fastest fairy in Turkey. And the smallest. His metabolism means he can’t eat much nectar without farting – an unforgivable insult among fairies. He prefers eating petals anyway. Weird!
In the opening scene he is excited about the upcoming school Sports Day and zips around performing stunts. At snack time he mumbles that he is full already and needs to practice more loop-the-loops. He flies into the forest to watch his friends laugh and play while he chews on a petal. Hasim, the school bully arrives. His friends laugh at Hasim’s jokes about “pipsqueak” Reis.
Reis has to get inventive about why he doesn’t eat so much. At school he pretends he has forgotten homework and has to miss lunch so people can’t see how little he eats. At home he dumps his nectar into the beak of Alekzummder, his pet hummingbird. During his big date with Selma he is so smitten that he actually eats nectar. Luckily Alekzummder is on hand to help cover up the ensuing commotion!
On Sports Day Reis slows down to give his friends a sporting chance. His coach is furious and says, “I see what you’re doing, Reis. You won’t get away with it forever.”
The nectar crop fails. Reis is as quick as ever but the others need the nectar for energy. Even Hasim is so slow that Reis dares to answer back to the bully. He is shocked when Hasim almost manages to catch him afterwards.
Reis feels bad about his friends suffering while he is okay. But as a “pipsqueak”, what can he do? When he sees Hasim speeding home when he thinks no-one is watching, he decides to follow him.
Hasim has found a field where the flowers are not affected and there is plenty of nectar. He is gorging himself. Reis tries some to make sure that it really is nectar, then stuffs his pockets and satchel to take it back to the others. He plans to dump it outside the school as he is still embarrassed about not needing nectar himself.
Hasim discovers nectar is missing and has no difficulty following Reis, who is farting from the nectar he tested. Hasim gets close enough to taunt Reis and a high-speed chase ensues. When Reis takes a shortcut through a tree trunk that Hasim is too big to fit through he thinks he has gotten away.
But Hasim has not given up. He catches up while Reis is waiting in the treeline for a chance to drop off the nectar, unseen. Hasim tells Reis there is a mistake, they shouldn’t be enemies. The two of them are very similar: they do not eat like the other fairies. Reis farts and rather than being offended Hasim promises to keep it a secret in return for Reis keeping his secret.
Reis is ashamed at the unintended insult and is even grateful to Hasim for promising not to mention it. He follows Hasim back to the field to return the nectar he “stole”.
On the way Hasim tells Reis that his friends think he is a “pipsqueak” anyway. Reis recognises the moment he witnessed and realises that his friends were being manipulated: like he is being manipulated now. He determines to bring the nectar to his friends after all.
He throws some nectar and Hasim dives after it. Reis is off, faster than ever. But Hasim is fast too, supercharged by years of nectar, despite his lazy attitude. To prevent his secret stash being discovered Hasim gives it everything he has and he might even be faster than Reis! But Reis is the better navigator and manages to burst into the clearing where his friends are barely alive. Reis tosses the nectar into the air and it floats down into their open mouths. Success!
The final image is Reis flying around his friends as they head off for a snack. The fairies eat their nectar, while Reis proudly munches on a petal. They finish and all of them fly straight up into the air afterwards: propelled by farts and giggles.
The prompt was: “The hero is a fairy from Turkey who is destined to save the world. The nemesis is a fairy who eats too much. The hero gets the upper hand using brains and brilliance.”
